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Chapter 2 Page 2
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MissElaney
MissElaney
2nd Nov 2018, 7:00 AM | edit | delete
Just finished this page. I'm uploading it several days early because I'm concerned that since this scene is mostly for exposition... I don't think as a reader I'd want to wait for two weeks a page and not have something more compelling happening. So, if I can afford to throw an update up earlier than usual until I get to more interesting things, that's what I'mma gonna do.

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lilacbombs
lilacbombs
2nd Nov 2018, 7:18 AM | edit Reply | Delete
Your backgrounds are really good! Very homey. Interior design is tough!
MissElaney
MissElaney
2nd Nov 2018, 8:11 AM | edit Reply | Delete
Thank you very much :D
MK_Wizard
MK_Wizard
2nd Nov 2018, 7:59 AM | edit Reply | Delete
Is he ok? Maybe his injury or stress is getting to him. It could be both.
MissElaney
MissElaney
2nd Nov 2018, 8:10 AM | edit Reply | Delete
He is just hard of hearing. I was kind of uncertain whether or not to convey it now or later because of when he is in the previous scene I didn't use that blur technique and instead made her yell at him all "CAN YOU NOT HEAR THAT", but he's just HOH, and I'll be building on it in following pages, since this is a "get to know people" chapter.
MissElaney
MissElaney
2nd Nov 2018, 11:27 AM | edit Reply | Delete
I edited it on second thought! I'll be using that whole blurry words technique later when he's outside, or it's otherwise got a lot of loudness around him.