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MissElaney
MissElaney
13th Nov 2019, 10:38 AM | edit | delete
Somehow I did this page in a day. I'm stunned.

But, we transition from one scene to the next -- transitions are always a struggle for me D:.

AND! I have SIX WHOLE PAGES OF BUFFER right now, do you know how fucking stoked I am about that?

Old readers will recognize the old pages (sorry), but still, I have six pages of buffer, I'm stoked. Fukken. Stoked.

What questions or thoughts do you have on the comic so far?

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lirvilas
lirvilas
13th Nov 2019, 9:23 PM | edit Reply | Delete
Sweet landscapes, love your painterly (is that a word) style.

And PLEASE recycle the hell out of previously produced pages!
MissElaney
MissElaney
20th Nov 2019, 9:34 AM | edit Reply | Delete
Thank you very much :D It's totally a word.
I'm about to load up the next page, recyclin'. Doing some alterations, but, the old pages'll be mooostly the same.
Tantz Aerine
Tantz Aerine
16th Nov 2019, 1:47 PM | edit Reply | Delete
Beautiful establishing shots!
MissElaney
MissElaney
20th Nov 2019, 9:35 AM | edit Reply | Delete
Thank you! I feel torn between going into hideous detail because I like the end result, versus going more spartan with my backgrounds.

But I got this one done in a single day somehow.
Thracecius
Thracecius
18th Nov 2019, 2:17 PM | edit Reply | Delete
Why wouldn't you reuse old pages? There was nothing wrong with them, at least to me. You have a great art style and an intriguing story, so even if your pages devolved into stick figure territory I'd probably keep reading. Not that I'm advocating you do that, mind you. ;)
MissElaney
MissElaney
20th Nov 2019, 9:37 AM | edit Reply | Delete
Thank you! I like them, I just feel kinda' bad that after all this waiting some of the content will not be new. But, I had changed the narrative and felt like the order of scenes was too rushed in the original. I'm liking this opening better :V. And thank you for sticking to it!
Thracecius
Thracecius
20th Nov 2019, 11:57 AM | edit Reply | Delete
I was sad to see the comic stalled with no obvious sign of it resuming (not that I looked harder than the most recent page, mind you), so I was thrilled to discover that you brought it back. I'm hooked on visual storytelling, especially ones that aren't superheroes or one-a-day gag comics, and after one of my favorites just recently finished (Raining Knives by Moth), it's nice to have somethign substantial to take it's place. :)